Hi everyone hope you enjoy it.
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, August 12, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Kia ora Hyacint,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your work. You have labelled a lot of items. I like how you used both languages to label items. Next time, maybe you can add a bit more in the description of the activity and what you have learned.
Mrs. Jia
Hi Hyacint! :)
ReplyDeleteKristhel here, So something I like about your work is that how you added colors to the text box it makes them look bolder / brighter to see! But maybe you can add arrows instead of squiggly lines? Oh and another thing you do need to work on is probably adding more to your description like saying what you did, found easy and found hard / challenging, but I love your work :) Hope to see more blog posts Hyacint! </3
Byeee!
-Kristhel :]