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Thursday, November 26, 2020

i hope you enjoy my coco crunch cereal

3 comments:

  1. Hi Hyacint,
    I love your advertisement. 'You better get crunching' is a great slogan. I really want to buy this as it looks really crunchy and I want to win a toy. I wonder if the game characters are the toys inside the box?
    Have a great day
    Mrs M

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  2. Hi Hyacint great work with your cereal it looks really good.I like the way you put in you better get crunching.I was interested in the way you put a lot of interesting words.I noticed that you put a lot of effete into your work well done.How do you think of all those words wow.From Gracie

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  3. Ola My name is Lee chin i'm from South Hornby school.I loved this because
    you added a cute dog and i love the catch fray you made.Get crunchy is a great catch fray.I was interested to read the games part because what kind of game?you can try and make the games part about what do you do to get to the game and what is the game because its some times confuse me.why did you think of putting toys in your cereal box and what kind of toy? Thank you for sharing Hyacint!

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